Today we watched our peers' opening sequences and gave constructive comments to help them improve. We had to think individually what we thought the plot was and then two points of feedback, one positive comment and one improvement.
Our feedback points were:
- Unusual approach
- Good camera work
- Good music choices - tension built at points
- Out of focus shot at the end - good ending
- Music - at points makes it sound like Television Drama
- Re-film shots in wide screen (that weren't)
- Length of shots need to be edited and cut down
- "Tom" and "Sophie" romantic section, looks too "happy" and focused around them
- Cuts more from "stalkers" point of view so that it build up tension
These points will be taken in to consideration when we re-edit next lesson.
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